The Official Writing Challenge
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07/13/07
Wow, you have shudderingly vivid descriptions of Lucifer. Very good writing with a unique perspective!!
07/13/07
Good thing we already know the end of the story! Very descriptive writing. Suspenseful, too, even though we know what happens next!
07/17/07
Very vivid - gave me goosebumps.
07/17/07
Excellent approach to the topic! Creative and compelling--very well-written.
Oh, this is very well written. Satan is a nasty little creature and you showed that very well. I am glad we know the end, as well.
07/18/07
I liked your approach to the topic, and your entry was very well written. Your imagery is very vivid. Great Job!
Colorful, descriptive writing that added a great flavor to your writing. And, looking at your title, and knowing how the story ultimately ends, this reader asks is there a false confidence in "Perfect Planning."? Nice job.
07/18/07
This is so vivid it gave me the shivers!! wow.
07/18/07
Whoa!! GREAT job, Ruth! Lucifer almost jumped off the page, you made him seem so real. That taloned finger stroking the apple... shiver

A creative take on the topic and a unique MC. One of my faves so far. Your talent shines with this entry. :)