The Official Writing Challenge
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07/13/07
Very good images and great tie in to the topic. Poor Jimmy! I relate to him because I can be just like him sometimes.
07/13/07
Amazing! You have just submitted MY entry, but told in a different setting. Great minds think alike. ;-)
You've captured the exuberance of over-confident youth very nicely.
Very good message, of course. How could it not be? I've been inspired to communicate the same one!
Am I being over-confident? :-?
This is an excellent, well-written story. Your message is plain, yet certainly not preachy. One suggestion: Leave spaces between your paragraphs for clarity and easier reading. Otherwise, keep up the great work!
07/14/07
Great illustration of an important truth. Nice work.
07/14/07
What a good lesson packaged in an engaging story. Not just for kids!! ;-)
07/17/07
Great lesson, and excellent storytelling. Enjoyed this!
This is a great story and lesson. Good job. I enjoyed it.