The Official Writing Challenge
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07/12/07
That last sentence made all the difference in the world. You kept me engaged right to the end. Good job.
Wow! You did an incredible job of dealing with this difficult topic. Having a friend that recently was involved in such a difficult decision, I really related to this story.
07/12/07
I've often wondered what I would do in this situation and your story will long be remembered as a wise path to follow. Pray. Read scripture. Wait on the Lord. Thanks very much for sharing this story and for pointing the reader to the REAL life that waits for all Christians.
Amazing! Great job. I had to read it a few times to be sure I didn't miss anything. Thanks!
Very tough place to be. Your words brought me right into the room and the situation with you.
This is a well written story about one of the most diffult decisions anyone is called to make, impossible to experience confidence here without God's guidance.
07/15/07
Excellent job. Tough position for anyone to be in. I think the word "confident" in the third paragraph was forced. Something I battle with all the time, trying not to force the topic word into the flow of the story. But, just my opinion. Great job otherwise. A super entry. God bless.
Thanks for this well-written, thought-provoking entry.
07/17/07
Beautiful! I especially liked "enveloped...enlightened...enabled..." Excellent, heartfelt writing.
07/17/07
I love how I didn't know what the decision would be until she said it aloud. You brought me along for the harrowing, terrible ride. Excellent.
07/18/07
I love the setting, love the tension, love the concept. I might have done a bit more showing where you have done telling. But I think the concept and story are excellent. Well done!
Wow. Very nice. I didn't kniow what was going to happen, so I read on in ernest. I loved the last line. It was a perfect ending and put a positive spin on the tough situation.
07/19/07
You did it again. Another piece that keeps our attention all the way through. Congrats on your well deserved placement. :)