The Official Writing Challenge
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05/02/05
Creative take on "Christmas." Reminded me a bit of the pool table entry from last week - the perpective of an inanimate object yet with a profound message.
Well done!
Blessings, Lynda
05/03/05
I love reading the story from the cave's point of view. Very creative. Maybe I'll try different povs like this. Very interesting....
05/03/05
Another thought, you could write this as a script for children's ministries. I can just imagine the scene! And such fun it would be to see.
05/03/05
Loved the way you showed the cave at birth and cave at death, burial and Resurrection. Loved the VICTORY TONE!
05/05/05
What a clever way to approach Christmas! Very creative!
05/05/05
Great job. I really enjoyed the connection between the caves and the point about the rocks crying out.