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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: Confident (07/05/07)

TITLE: The Day The Plane Touched Down
By Mariane Holbrook
07/10/07


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THE DAY THE PLANE TOUCHED DOWN



We heard the plane in the distance before we saw it, easing its way along the tarmac at New York’s LaGuardia airport toward us.

Standing inside at the terminal window, members of my family watched as two of the flight crew disembarked. The next one off the Air Force plane was my sister, Margie, carrying her infant son, and holding the hand of her six-year-old daughter, Becky.

We all let out a collective gasp as the stretchers appeared at the door; first, four-year-old Debbie, strapped securely but looking unsure. Then her father, Bob, was lifted out, lying uncomfortably and rigidly on the second stretcher.

Flashes from photographers’ cameras made Debbie turn her head in surprise and sudden fear.

We quickly made our way to a nearby private room that had been made available to our family to greet the arrivals.

The sympathetic article in the New York Times the next morning was accompanied by a grainy photo taken on the tarmac with this headline: “MISSIONARY AND CHILD, STRICKEN WITH POLIO, ARRIVE AT LAGUARDIA AIRPORT.

In heartbreaking detail it reported that my sister’s husband and their daughter, Debbie, were stricken with polio only two weeks after their home in the Philippines had been completely destroyed by a massive mud slide and only one month before the Salk vaccine was discovered by Jonas Salk in 1954 and made available to Americans both home and abroad.

The American Embassy in the Philippines, learning of Bob and Debbie’s paralysis, requested permission for them to fly home in an Air Force plane. The “Sister Kenney treatment” of wrapping affected limbs with hot, moist compresses to reduce muscle spasms and the resultant pain was proving unsuccessful and emergency treatment in the States was desperately needed to save their lives.

Their story was picked up by the Associated Press and printed in newspapers across the country.

Bob and Debbie were immediately admitted to a New York rehabilitation hospital where for many months, they followed a rigorous and exhausting therapy regimen.

Bob, a quiet, godly man, immersed himself in prayer for Debbie whose right leg was completely and permanently paralyzed. Eventually, she was fitted with a full metal brace and learned to walk with a degree of facility.

Bob regained some of the use of his paralyzed left leg and eventually was able to walk again, though with a very distinct limp.

After nearly a year of therapy, they were discharged from the rehabilitation hospital and returned to the college town outside New York City where Margie had been living with the children and family members who helped care for her other children.

One day not long after their discharge from the hospital, Bob received a phone call from the president of the local Christian college. Would Bob address the student body of nearly 1,000 Christian young people who were preparing for the ministry? Since this college was Bob and Margie’s alma mater, he readily agreed. His story was by now well-known, having been written up in the local newspaper as well as in the college newspaper. His had become a familiar face once again on the college campus.

The day arrived for Bob to speak in chapel. He gripped the sides of the pulpit for support and looked over the earnest, sympathetic, young people before him, some quickly wiping tears that were spilling down their faces. Most knew that eight years earlier, Bob as a student, had occupied one of the seats in this hallowed chapel.

After what seemed like an eternity, this young, first-term missionary and father held aloft his Bible and said, “Philippians 1:6. ‘Being confident of this very thing, that he which hath begun a good work in you will perform it until the day of Jesus Christ.’ ”

Bob then delivered a thirty-minute message on so being totally and permanently committed to Christ, that neither mud slides nor Polio, nor
dust storms, nor illness, nor financial hardship would ever deter these young people from the mandate God had placed on their lives.

The response was immediate, it was overwhelming and for most, it was permanent.

In 1957, Bob and Margie returned with their family to the Philippines. Much later, Debbie, still wearing a heavy leg brace, earned a master’s degree from Penn State University and answered God’s call to the Philippines where as a missionary linguist, she translated and published several books of the New Testament into various tribal dialects.

To God be all the glory!




Scripture taken from the King James Version of the Bible.


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Dee Yoder 07/13/07
Wow! What a beautiful testimony of God's work in the lives of your family. This is a perfect story for this topic and it's written clearly and interestingly. I truly enjoyed reading about their lives. Thanks for sharing this!
Sharlyn Guthrie 07/13/07
This is a story that needed to be told. I'm so glad that you wrote it and that I was priveleged to read it. How inspirational and right on topic!
Pam Carlson-Hetland07/14/07
This is a wonderful story emphasizing what confidence in our Lord can bring us through, and to His glory. I was clearly written, good details, and I liked how it was all wrapped up at the end. Good writing. Good job.
Lynda Schultz 07/14/07
Wonderful story that needs to be widely told, and retold. It's an inspiration. Thanks for sharing it. Well done.
Constance Gilbert07/14/07
A well expressed story that inspires as well as reminds us that through Christ, all things ARE possible. Your writing showed enthusiasm,example, encouragement,endurance, and was entertaining- that's a lot in few words! So glad God called you to write, Connie
Edy T Johnson 07/14/07
This is a winner in my book. It grips the reader from the git-go and builds to the crescendo scripture verse (one of my very favorites). On topic, on target! I love this story.
Joanne Sher 07/15/07
What an amazing story! Wish you'd had the words to give a bit more of his speech, but this was totally gripping. Wonderful.
Jan Ackerson 07/17/07
Very inspirational to read!
dub W07/17/07
An inspiring piece. Watch run-ons and eliminate gerunds. Powerful testimony of these people would lead many to Christ.
Sara Harricharan 07/17/07
This title sets us up for a good story and you certainly deliver! Inspirational, I liked the story-time voice you used. There were a few missing commas in some places, I think, where a break in the sentences would've made for some smooth reading. Otherwise, well done! ^_^
Benjamin Graber07/17/07
Awesome testimony to God's work in these people's lives!
Joy Faire Stewart07/17/07
What an amazing story. I was captivated from the beginning.
Patty Wysong07/17/07
This is so good...thank you.
Kristen Hester 07/17/07
What a great story. These missionaries are an inspiration. Thanks for sharing!
Verna Cole Mitchell 07/19/07
What a beautiful story of confidence. You did a tremendous job of presenting it all clearly and with great honor to God. I'll be checking in on more of your writing.
Linda Watson Owen07/19/07
Oh, Mariane! What a wonderful piece you've written! I too was captivated from the very first sentence. Knowing, too, I think, the chapel Bob spoke in that you mentioned made this story all the more precious for me personally. Your skill really brought this powerfully inspiring story to life for us all!


   
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