The Official Writing Challenge
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I love your story. What a beautiful testament to the way God works in our lives even when we don't know it. I like how your MC walked in thinking she was not experienced, but found that she did have all the experience she needed. Great job, keep writing.
Experience IS the best teacher! Enjoyable story.
Lovely - and such truth here!Enjoyed this very much.
This was wonderful for me. Thank you for such an encouraging story:)
Great ending!
Great twist at the end!

I'd suggest that you break down your longer paragraphs into shorter chunks, and separate out all your dialogue.

I enjoyed this sweet story.
This is an excellent story for confidence. I like the ending, too.
Great message for moms and employers.
Great story - I wish I could have been a stay-at-home mom. Thanks for sharing this.
Love that ending! What a kicker! Connie sure has the spunk to stick it out. A few tips, in the beginning, use her name instead of "Middle-aged woman" This keeps us close to the story. Also, watch for awkward sentences like "Expertly avoiding stepping" is quite a tongue twister. ^_^ Keep up the good work though.
Raising 13 children would prepare a person for a variety of jobs! Great story. I really liked it. (After raising 13 kids I think I would be too tired to get a job with toddlers.)
Great example of life bringing all the experience we need.