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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: Confident (07/05/07)

TITLE: It All Depends On Who's In Charge
By Lynda Schultz


Soon. Too soon. I know you told me that youíd be with us, that we should be courageous and strong. I can hear your words ringing in my ears, reverberating through every sinew and muscle, sticking like Jordanís muddy banks to my every sense. Nevertheless, it still feels like itís too soon.

You took Moses too soon. I know, I know ó he blew it at the rock, but Iíd rather follow him than be the leader. After all, he was your friend, got closer to you than any man ever has. I hear that voice again reminding me about what you said: youíll be with me just like you were with Moses.

I just feel that I will never be as close to you as he was, obey you as well as he did ó the rock notwithstanding! Iíve never had that intimacy with you that he did. Thatís my fault, I know. Iím sure not blaming you. I try to meditate day and night on your word, just like you said. Itís not easy to find the time or the energy with all these people at my heels.

When I think of all the things that could go wrong, I get a bad feeling. I told the people what you said, and they promised to do everything they were instructed to do. But, as soon as they said that they would obey me just as well as they obeyed Moses, I could feel the hair rising on the back of my neck. They think they are better than their fathers. You and I both know they arenít. I know Iím not.

Then thereís the business with the prostitute in Jericho. I hope I didnít make a mistake there. You told me not to spare anyone and now I have to live up to the promise that Micah and Judah made to that woman ó and to whoever ends up sheltered in her house. She did take a lot of risks for them, and showed some strong faith in you. Still, I feel as though Iím already breaking the rules you made. How can you bless me, or these people, if I donít do exactly what you tell me? I hope there are exceptions.

Iím a military man, not a diplomat, so who knows how many toes I trampled on issuing the orders to get us across the river. That WAS pretty amazing though. I remember the Red Sea parting, but not too many others do. Crossing the Jordan with the waters piled up before us was like dťjŗ-vu for me. I still havenít gotten over the big hoopla once we crossed. For the first time, I really felt that the people saw me as their leader, not just as a Moses stand-in. Now that Iíve reached that plateau, Iím not sure I want to be here.

I suspect your latest command brought me down a couple of rungs on the leadership ladder. That business with the circumcision took the stuffing out of most of the male population ó quite literally! Boy, you sure do ask us to do some scary things. While the men were healing we could have been wiped out, easy pickings for any ten year old armed with a pick handle.

Well, here we are, facing Jericho. I sound confident, but my innards are churning. You told me to be strong and take the land you promised, and here I am thinking that the desert is beginning to look pretty good!

Wait, someoneís coming from the Jericho side.

ďWho goes there? My men know better than to draw a sword in the presence of their commander, so youíre either suffering a lapse in judgment or, you are an enemy. Which is it?"

ďItís a good thing YOU donít have your sword drawn then, isnít it. Iím not one of your men, nor am I one of your enemies. Give your brain and your innards a break, Joshua, I have come as the commander of the Lordís army.Ē

Get down, man! Get down. This is a Moses moment.

ďMy Lord, give me your orders.Ē

ďMoses took his shoes off in my presence once; you do the same. I touched the ground you are standing on and it is now holy."

Forgive me; here I was thinking I was in charge of all this. Itís you; it always has been. Just as I was Mosesí servant, I am more than happy to be yours. Issue your orders, Lord: Iím ready now, whenever you are.

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Janice Cartwright07/12/07
As I was flipping through subjects for this week's challenge Joshua nearly leapt off the page as prime candidate among confident biblical characters. So glad now I didn't light there. You did an outstanding job with him.
Dee Yoder 07/12/07
When God comes onto the scene, we mere mortals instantly know who's in charge! Too bad we soon forget that nugget of truth; we could save ourselves some worry if we'd keep it in mind. :) I enjoyed this peek into Joshua's thoughts.
Jacquelyn Horne07/12/07
A good article on how Joshua may have reacted to his leadership position. I was a litte taken back with "dťjŗ-vu" and "hoopla" but then I haven't researched language for that period of time. It was well written anyhow.
Catrina Bradley 07/13/07
Love it! I like how you made Joshua such a real person with real doubts. My favorite line: "This is a Moses moment.".
Dixie Phillips07/13/07
Loved your creativity. Way to capture our attention and keep it.
william price07/15/07
Interesting insights of what might have been going through Joshua's mind.
Great message. God bless.
Verna Cole Mitchell 07/15/07
I truly loved the whole story. It was so well written. You made Joshua's thoughts very believable.
Sara Harricharan 07/16/07
WOW! This is amazing! Absolutely amazing! I love this view of Joshua. It's so down-to-earth and true. You cover a lot of fear and trust issues here and yet you manage to keep the voice and tone as someone we can all relate to. I enjoyed reading this very much, can't think of anything to change. Good job! ^_^
Joanne Sher 07/17/07
Enjoyed this very much - great job with Joshua's characterization. Gave me a new perspective on Joshua.
Maxx .07/18/07
Way to get inside the head of this character. Well done and gave me a few chuckles!
Kristen Hester07/18/07
My pastor just finished preaching the book of Joshua, so I loved this story. You brought Joshua to life for me. Great job!
Dianne Janak07/19/07
This was so enlightening and yet fun to read and made me think differently about his story.. very creative and thought provoking.. Dianne
Patty Wysong07/19/07
Neat!! I've often wondered how it was for Joshua--talk about 'big shoes to fill'! You put us in his head and heart, made us feel his churnings. Good job!!!
Clyde Blakely07/25/07
Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful! You got into Joshua's head as you got into mine - ain't it the truth.

God bless and keep writing.