The Official Writing Challenge
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A really neat story that was right on target Topic-Wise. Nicely written, also. Good Job!
Sweet story. Beuty is definitely deeper than our skin. Nice job.
I really appreciated this one; it is an excellent reminder that character is much more beautiful than any physical appearances...
This is an excellent story with an excellent message very fitting to the topic.
My heart goes out to all the Beckys of the've done a great job capturing her anguish, and you've resisted the temptation to have her and the cute pastor find true love in the space of 750 words.

I felt slightly uneasy that the pastor would talk to her about another churchgoer's shortcomings. Maybe a slight edit there?

Becky was just the sort of person that I'd love to hang out with. Nice job.
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story! The points you make don't pound me over the head and I sympathize and empathize with your main character and her fears.
Great message - I think with a little work this would be great in a teen/young adult magazine.
I really enjoyed this story. It flowed and the message was nicely told.