The Official Writing Challenge
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07/12/07
A great scripture lesson, and written very well. Right on target! Kudos!
07/13/07
A very down to earth, Godly lesson on proof of God's existence, and the confidence of His children. Wonderful!
07/13/07
The framework of a conflict at school was a good context for your devotional.

There were a few spots where the dialogue didn't quite ring true...

...but I loved the gentle spirit of this piece!
07/13/07
Boy, do I remember those discussions in school! Your story is an example of a good plan to follow when the children have to deal with these kinds of issues. I enjoyed reading it.
07/13/07
Enjoyed the message of this very much. Would have loved a bit more interaction between the characters, rather than mom "telling", but that may just be personal opinion. Great object lesson. I definitely needed to hear it!
Wise words. I appreciated your pointing out that she had a lot of learning and growing yet to do. I have a hard time remembering that myself. I just want to be mature already! Thanks for sharing.