The Official Writing Challenge
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07/12/07
Very, very good! I enjoyed this poem immensely! It touched my inner soul. Great job!
My heart is thankful in agreement with this same confidence.
07/12/07
Effective use of repetition here!

Perhaps a little more work on meter, for additional polish on this gem.
Nicely done! I appreciate the simplicity in your statements, it makes the images very vivid.
07/13/07
"I'm confident that He sees the rest of the picture in surround". That's my favorite line because I often wonder why He doesn't answer my prayers a certain way. Knowing He sees the BIG picture is comforting when the results don't seem to fit my purpose!
07/13/07
Love love LOVE the message. The meter tripped me up a bit, but this was such a blessing to read!