The Official Writing Challenge
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05/02/05
This was a fun piece yet full of so much truth! Light delivery with a heavy message - great job!
Blessings, Lynda
I agree with Lynda, great fun with lots of truth entwined. The title was a grabber too. :)
My favorite line - "He rose.... OUR ROSE.... "that's so beautiful!
05/03/05
Great poetry, I loved the three day layaway plan!
05/05/05
The title caught my eye ... the writing kept it. Good work!
05/08/05
Well written and enjoyable poem. You made every word/phrase count. Not a forced rhyme. Well done.