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07/12/07
You're an inspiration!

I was left slightly confused as to Nadia's syndrome, almost as if you assume the reader knew it...but I had no idea why you made many trips to the hospital. A word of explanation may have been helpful, as would spaces between paragraphs.

I can't imagine working with special needs children in an unfamilar country. Loved reading about your journey of confidence!
07/13/07
A fascinating read - I felt like I was right there with you. Wonderful.
07/13/07
How brave you both were to move to another country AND take in special needs children! God was and is guiding you and He has equipped you through the years to handle the needs of your special family with confidence. Thanks for sharing your story!
07/15/07
This is an amazing story and truly inspiring. I like how you described the children, "Society’s ‘voiceless". Thanks for sharing it with us!
07/18/07
A really nice story, but many readers might miss it due to it not being exactly "reader friendly"; (just a suggestion; to make it easier for reader to digest, break it down into paragraphs, with white spaces between - that way it isn't so forboding to dive in and get the pearls.) Good job.