The Official Writing Challenge
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Excellent!!! This one is a great story, and matches the topic very well!
Fantastic story. This held my attention through the end. I loved your description and comparison pictures. Great job.
This is an outstanding suspense story with great descriptions. It grabs the reader from the beginning and keeps holding.
07/12/07
Excellent--sometimes the Lord calls us to act in ways totally counterintuitive to common sense...I enjoyed this suspense-filled story.
Great job! I enjoyed this tale and I could feel the MC's terror in the beginning.
07/13/07
Beautiful story...God surely knows how to strengthen His own and fill them with confidence. Well written too. Good piece!
07/13/07
This is amazing. You had me shaking in my boots. Haven't read many yet, but this is definitely my favorite so far. This is going in my favorites! Excellent.
07/13/07
Oooh, I love stories like this! Wonderfully written and gripping in every detail. I couldn't stop reading!
07/13/07
Super story — fits the theme to a tee in my opinion. And, I was hooked right to the end in nail-biting suspense! Good work.
Wow! This was powerful, and I loved the way that you addressed two different types of confidence. This is one of my favorites so far!
This is my favorite so far. Great job.
Your story is suspenseful and well-crafted. It makes me think of the Brother Andrew story. Somehow the word, "atmosphere" didn't seem to fit as it was used in your story. I wonder if the word "aura" would work better...just a thought. Nice work!
07/18/07
Terrific! Tears popped into my eyes as the guard said "Next"...and the Bible Pusher moved through the checkpoint. Very, Very spellbinding, and I loved the suspense! Great Job!! Many Kudos!!
07/19/07
Congratulations on your EC. This is a great story for this topic. You had me captivated from the beginning. Great job.
07/19/07
Great job! Congrats on your EC win!
07/29/07
I like your style Peter. Am I right in thinking that you're into action, suspense & danger for the Kingdom of God? Congrats on your EC.