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07/12/07
Lovely--I think St. Patrick would approve. You've done a really nice tribute to his "shield", and made it uniquely your own.
07/13/07
Lovely poem. Well written. I loved the verse/stanza arrangement. Very creative.
07/13/07
I love the parallelism of this, and the wonderful message. Beautiful tribute.
07/13/07
I like it. This is almost like a Triad in the finest tradition of the ancient Celtic bards. The title caught my attention as well.
07/15/07
I like your reference to the trinity in each stanza. I think this could be a song.
07/18/07
This gave me goosebumps. You should be proud. An excellent bit of writing, friend! I especially like the last stanzas of each verse. Good job. ^_^
07/18/07
"I arise, I stand, I rest...in His strength", you say; thus you are confident. Nicely stated! God Bless.
07/18/07
Very nice. I love the phrase "the uniqueness of the Threeness". I feel at peace after reading this. Thanks for this blessing.