The Official Writing Challenge
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Interesting entry for "Christmas." It was definitely captivating - you have wonderful talent for fiction, a way of drawing the reader in and leaving them wanting more (which is the obvious goal of any writer!). If you are who I think you are, you've posted yet another excellent piece.
Blessings, Lynda
This one is tight and visual. Excellent writing style.. storyline is deep and moving. I like the dark overtones and the good that remained alive. Truely a talented author. This one will do well. Great job!
This took me to a world I've never been before. Great writing talent!
Excellent! I could see the whole scene. Could be a book excerpt. You made me care about Karen and Trent and wonder what was coming...and what went before.
Tightly written with well drawn characters. Good to be reminded that those outside the family of God have redeeming characteristics.