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06/14/07
This is very nice. A great devotional piece. One I need to reread every now and then.

Although I'm sure some teens would appreciate this, I think the serenity and message would appeal more to adults, and mature teens.

Lovely visuals.
Again, a lovely devotional piece. It may be a bit mature for teens, but I could be underestimating them! Lovely pictures of nature!
06/16/07
Wow - some of the longest first line sentences I've ever seen! Nicely done devotional, but not exactly a teens "cup of tea" (in my humble opinion) but definitely lovely!
Wonderful read of quiet time.