The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 1040 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
06/14/07
Wow, this is a wonderful poem about the open-ended future of the young adult. The images created are awesome!
06/15/07
Clever and appropriate poetic analogy for those YA's starting out on their journey of life. Really enjoyed the poem.
06/16/07
This was artfully done. It is certainly worthy of publication. Life's journey is captured, replete with all of its temptations, pitfalls, and trophies that entice. I like the image of a road and our journey over it, and that speed is of no consequence. The ending, of course, is my favorite. Home at last! Very, very well done and totally befitting a Master!
06/17/07
This would be a perfect poem to share with high school graduates. Excellent message!
06/18/07
Great description and lesson that teens will certainly relate to. Enjoyed this very much.
06/20/07
Smooth reading poem.
06/20/07
Very nice! I like it. My favorite line was :
"Just muscle built upon a mix of hi-grade fuel and air. "
Great writing!
06/20/07
I love this poem, I know it was written for teens but as I read it I found myself reminiscing of my own teens...Great poem!
06/20/07
Your poetry and message are perfect, as awlays. You are, indeed, a master writer.
06/20/07
Great analogy that teen boys can relate to - a muscle car!
06/20/07
What can I say? Like all of your poetry, this is great!!!
06/20/07
I loved it, the imagery and symbolism. Excellent!