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06/16/07
A fantastic story of a "fast-thinking, caring and heroic teen!" Indeed, proof positive that all Teens are NOT irresponsible and self-centered! Super job! Plus, well written and creative!
06/18/07
I enjoyed reading this story! Your descriptions were flowing and realistic. The main character is likable, but not too "perfect" to be believable.
Good story, great writing, and believable. I have known the teenagers who could get into mischief, choose and dump the wrong friends, and do something incredibly self-sacrificing all in one day. This would be a great story for teenagers to read. Good job.
06/19/07
What a wonderful "portrait" of the complexity of a teen. Great job with the characterization especially.
06/19/07
Definitely well-written.

Some teens may see this as preachy and unrealistic, although this adult certainly liked it...a great deal!
This is very well written. I like how you built up the suspense, as well as how you showed the mixed emotions typical of a teen.
06/20/07
Nicely done. I was shocked by the events as they unfolded. Well written and good storyline.