The Official Writing Challenge
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06/15/07
I love it, from beginning to end. I love your voice, it's so easy to "listen" to, and that's what I felt like I was doing when I read your story. Marvelous! Too many favorite lines to quote one. GREAT job! :)
06/16/07
Sad saga of a young lad too smart for his age. Perhaps this might fit into last weeks challenge better - as he is elevent; not sure, but could this story be true? Either way, fiction or non - it's well written, touched my heart - and was uniquely different; so much so that it kept my interest throughout. Great job! AND, creative!
06/16/07
Comment from my husband: A very good story! Tell him I said so. (he's picky, believe me.) :)
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Oh, this is soooo good! I'm so glad I read it. I loved the voice. The descriptions and the wit were well written. I'm gonna call this one a "gem"!
Oh, this is great. It's witty and intelligent. I really enjoy the subject matter. It's just wonderful all around!
06/18/07
Great story, good writing, and perfect for teens to read. Your main character is smart, funny, and an emotional preteen. Good contrast between the two parts of this character!
06/19/07
Fun, witty, and I LOVE the voice! Great stuff.
06/19/07
Lots of fun--I read a lot of YA literature for my job, and this guy deserves a book of his own.
This excellently written story really leaves the reader thinking, "What's next?"
This is uniquely creative and has appeal for teens, as well as adults.
06/20/07
Great writing. This made me think Stike one for the underdog! I really liked this story.
06/20/07
Dog boy indeed. He has my empathy. I don't feel sorry for him and I hope he gets everything together. ^_^ This was a fun and enjoyable read, I especially liked the end. This is a favorite of mine for this week!