The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh, this is a really good story. I like your main character and the voice you've created for him. I wish I could find out what happens next!
I really liked this story. The voice of the main character was great. The dialogue with the girl is so real. Great job!
Terrific! The title is perfect and the ending makes want to shout: "Sequel!" — great story.
I love your title and the way it works into the story line. This is such a good example of what can happen when teens, or anyone for that matter, "live their faith".
Love the voice of this character - and the perfume example. This was very authentic, and touched me deeply.
This well-written story made me want my life to show that fragrance more. Great job.
Great Story, Well written! Congratulations on your EC win!!
Congratulations - wonderful WONDERFUL!