The Official Writing Challenge
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06/14/07
Oh, this is a really good story. I like your main character and the voice you've created for him. I wish I could find out what happens next!
I really liked this story. The voice of the main character was great. The dialogue with the girl is so real. Great job!
06/16/07
Terrific! The title is perfect and the ending makes want to shout: "Sequel!" — great story.
I love your title and the way it works into the story line. This is such a good example of what can happen when teens, or anyone for that matter, "live their faith".
06/18/07
Love the voice of this character - and the perfume example. This was very authentic, and touched me deeply.
This well-written story made me want my life to show that fragrance more. Great job.
06/21/07
Great Story, Well written! Congratulations on your EC win!!
06/21/07
Congratulations - wonderful WONDERFUL!