The Official Writing Challenge
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06/14/07
Nice devotion.

Great tie-in to the normal things of life.
06/14/07
Good devotional that would appeal to teens. It reads like something a teen would "get." (And I love Arby's -- which makes me partial to your story.) Good job.
06/19/07
This devotional is perfect for teens and I enjoyed it, too! It's not too serious, but it has a deep message and the tone is friendly, not condemning. Good writing!
06/20/07
This is a very well written devotional, great job.
06/20/07
This should be in a teen devotional book! Great messages to teens everywhere. Who knew a fry box could inspire one to write for Him?
I loved your intro! Maybe because it's lunch time, but it really got my attention. Great devotional for a teen! Way to go.
This is a very good teen devotion. Your lead-in with the fry is a great way to get attention.
Excellant teen devotional. Right pace, right length. Right lesson.
Great devotional. Very well written. Great job.