The Official Writing Challenge
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06/16/07
I like this. It is easy to read and has a good message. Most teenage girls could relate to it. Nice job!
06/18/07
Teens love stories like this, that give both answers and closure. Nicely done.
I love that you had Mom rolling her eyes--a great switch! this is a good family story with a wonderful message.
Your story is well-constructed and it kept my interest. The feelings expressed are realistic for many teens in a new situation, and you offered hope in Christ.
06/18/07
Great detail and voice. You captured it just right, and I love the lesson you wove into it. Teens would definitely love this.
06/18/07
The setting, the characters, the main character are all just right for the teen genre. Good job! Teens would like reading this.