The Official Writing Challenge
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I like this. It is easy to read and has a good message. Most teenage girls could relate to it. Nice job!
Teens love stories like this, that give both answers and closure. Nicely done.
I love that you had Mom rolling her eyes--a great switch! this is a good family story with a wonderful message.
Your story is well-constructed and it kept my interest. The feelings expressed are realistic for many teens in a new situation, and you offered hope in Christ.
Great detail and voice. You captured it just right, and I love the lesson you wove into it. Teens would definitely love this.
The setting, the characters, the main character are all just right for the teen genre. Good job! Teens would like reading this.