The Official Writing Challenge
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06/16/07
Realistic dialogue. I'm glad they reached out to Zayda before she needed it.
06/16/07
Know who your friends are, and help protect the naive if at all possible. Two good messages for teens. Realistic dialog. I like it.
Your dialogue seems very realistic. I'm sure many girls can relate to the experience of being "used" by other girls. I like your solution to the problem. Niced job!
06/18/07
Very good writing and a story any teen can identify with. I like the dialog, too.
I thought you tagged the genre well and enjoyed reading this story. It held my interest with just the right mix of dialogue and action. I also believe you could reach a teen with this as they would be more likely to relate to the language. good job!!