The Official Writing Challenge
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I absolutely love this piece! As teen myself, let me tell you, this was aewsome! And the ending really caught me by surprise. Wonderful Biblical fiction here! Keep up the stupendous work!

My only complaint: I'm fairly certain that "satisfyingly" isn't a word.
This story grabbed my attention kept it and whirled me around at the end! Great job!