The Official Writing Challenge
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I wonder if the Ingalls ever weathered an ice storm with breaking trees? Nah... they lived in a Little House on the Prairie... no trees.. i forgot. Good story... a reminder of what is important in our lives.
Great story! I can't say that I've ever had an ice storm or sleet on the California beach ... but it sounded dramatic!
Great hook, sucked me right in! Engaging story.
You missed the Ingalls but you didn't miss Christ. He's always there through the fiercest storm. Nice story.