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An excellent children's story. I can see it being read in an elementary science class to the children's great amusement.
06/11/07
This will make a big hit with the children! Fun and well written!
06/12/07
Perfect, and I like the repetition of "hungry and in a hurry" in the early paragraphs.
06/12/07
Just delightful and descriptive. I can definitely see the pictures for this one. Kids would love this.
06/13/07
Cute story that's just right for the little one's to learn about butterflies and how they grow.
Very sweet story. I really like this and your descriptions are so colorful that they bring vivid images to the reader's mind. Oh, I see that you included the noisy little cicadas in your story too.:0) My entry was about just that, in "A Tale by Serenada The Cicada." Keep on writing, very nice! God bless. Janice
This is a nice story. My 7 year old daughter, who is a red head, really liked this story.
06/13/07
A sweet story, that can have many applications. :)
This should have wonderful graphics to accompany it. It would be so good as a teaching for children. It has all the aspects of a wonderful child's story. Please let it grow.