The Official Writing Challenge
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An excellent children's story. I can see it being read in an elementary science class to the children's great amusement.
This will make a big hit with the children! Fun and well written!
Perfect, and I like the repetition of "hungry and in a hurry" in the early paragraphs.
Just delightful and descriptive. I can definitely see the pictures for this one. Kids would love this.
Cute story that's just right for the little one's to learn about butterflies and how they grow.
Very sweet story. I really like this and your descriptions are so colorful that they bring vivid images to the reader's mind. Oh, I see that you included the noisy little cicadas in your story too.:0) My entry was about just that, in "A Tale by Serenada The Cicada." Keep on writing, very nice! God bless. Janice
This is a nice story. My 7 year old daughter, who is a red head, really liked this story.
A sweet story, that can have many applications. :)
This should have wonderful graphics to accompany it. It would be so good as a teaching for children. It has all the aspects of a wonderful child's story. Please let it grow.