The Official Writing Challenge
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Cutely written and I like how the Fruits of The Spirit were arranged. The repitition is a nice touch as young children like the repeated word. The only thing I would say is some of the words or descriptions are a little for an older child, but maybe could be read to a smaller one. All in all, this is really neat. I can see the wise Owl and all of the eager animals hungrily chewing away. Nice touch at the end. God bless your writing.Janice
06/09/07
As an adult I really liked this, especially the ways in which the animals demonstrate their learned virtues. But I wasn't sure how it would go down with a child. So I asked my ten-year-old and he positively loved it. Very well done indeed!
06/10/07
This would be a great story to use in Sunday School or Children's Church to teach the fruits of the spirit. Good descriptions!
06/11/07
Delightful teaching tool! Well written!
07/12/07
Cute piece! I noticed you're from West Michigan! I live in Jenison and my brother actually lives in the same zip-code area as you do (Walker, right?) Anyway, I look forward to reading more of your work!