The Official Writing Challenge
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An excellent fairy tale. The little girl who still lives inside me loved it.
06/11/07
A tale that sure to please girls, both big and small! Great writing!
06/11/07
Very sweet - a perfect little fairy tale. I wish you had more words to expand the end, but that's the challenge for ya! Lovely.
06/11/07
Very nice fairy tale. Kind of suspected what might happen, but this is sure to entertain some young girls. Good job!
06/11/07
Really nice fairy tale, and the concept of a glass heart is quite original. Would have liked a twist at the end, but I still enjoyed this a great deal.
What a lovely story! I enjoyed this from the title to the very happy ending.
06/12/07
A sweet fairy tale. I think girls would enjoy this story very much.
What a great children's fairy tale. I really liked it. I wish there was one or two more sentences with a moral or message to finish it.
Very good fair tale. Little girls will love it.
06/14/07
Look out for a brand-new fairy tale!
This was great! I enjoyed it from beginning to end (except for when poor Jacob got thrown out of the castle.) Excellent twist the end and the touch of a glass heart was just right. Awesome writing! This is another one of my favorites this week!