The Official Writing Challenge
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06/07/07
LOL! This was entertaining and creative right down to the last line! Since I for one can't write poetry - I really enjoyed how you told a complete story in that fashion:) I think a child would enjoy the action in it too!
06/11/07
This is sure to be a hit with the children! Fantastic!
06/11/07
You are very good with names. I liked your main character's name and the town name "Cookiepatch". I think your story would really appeal to the 4th grade level, the exact level your entry was rated for. It is a very fun story poem.
Cute, Cute! Kids will love reading this. I read it acouple of times... it is so much fun. "Deputy Baxter's grey uniform was always spit-shined, clean and neat"...adorable way to describe the "cat deputy." Very cleaver writing.
correction: "Very clever writing."