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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: Write something suitable for CHILDREN (05/31/07)

TITLE: Swish, Hush, Shush-a-bye
By Sharlyn Guthrie
06/06/07


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“Daddy, what’s that chirping sound that’s coming from the hall?”
A cricket calling for its love, my darling. That is all.
“But Daddy, what’s the loud “harrumph” from way down by the pond?”
Frogs are singing lullabies to tadpoles that have spawned.
“The mama duck is quacking. Why isn’t she asleep?”
From hungry owls and foxes her ducklings she must keep.

Swish, hush, shush-a-bye, rustle, hustle who
wings, sings, brushes by whispering, “God loves you.”



“I think I hear a siren. Don’t policemen go to bed?”
They work all through the nighttime to keep us safe, instead.
“Do other people work at night? O Daddy, tell me, please.”
Doctors, nurses, firemen are just a few of these.
“If just a few, then won’t you tell me, Daddy, are there more?”
Hush, my child, and I will tell of night workers galore:

Swish, hush, shush-a-bye, rustle, hustle who
wings, sings, brushes by whispering, “God loves you.”



Workers stocking grocery shelves and people sorting mail,
pilots, cabbies, bus drivers, and those who guard the jail,
bakers making doughnuts, birthday cakes, and treats;
semi drivers transporting groceries, milk, and meat;
people printing newspapers, others selling gas,
construction workers mending roads so travelers can pass.

Swish, hush, shush-a-bye, rustle, hustle who
wings, sings, brushes by whispering, “God loves you.”



Listen now, my precious child, before you close your eyes.
Another One is wide awake. He’s loving, strong, and wise.
Those other workers go to sleep while you are wide awake.
But He is always on the job, a guardian for your sake.
He is the great Almighty God. You are His treasure rare.
So do not worry, little one, you’re always in His care.

Swish, hush, shush-a-bye, rustle, hustle who
wings, sings, brushes by whispering, “God loves you.”



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Marilee Alvey06/07/07
I am happy to be the first person to comment on this delightful story. It's charming. I loved the title. I've noticed how parents buy many, many sleepytime books (I wonder why?) By the title, I thought you had something going, but when I read this story, I knew..... What an original angle, to speak of night workers who don't sleep...and work it into our God who never sleeps. The rhyme was delightful, too. It seemed like a winning idea for a book. Go for it!
Verna Cole Mitchell 06/08/07
This is a wonderful children's story. The musical lyrics of the refrain are lovely, and the message is just right. I can hear a little one saying, "Read it again."
Dee Yoder 06/10/07
Oh, this is really a wonderful story poem. The words are beautifully rhymed and flowing. A child would love this at bedtime!
Myrna Noyes06/10/07
Lovely nighttime story-poem that I'm sure small children would enjoy hearing over and over again! Nice job with the flow and rhyme. Great message, too! :)
Rita Garcia06/11/07
Love the title and the delightful poem delivered! Sure to please the wee ones!
Beth LaBuff 06/11/07
I really like your poem too. The refrain is very good and adds a lot to the overall effect of the poem. Very, very good writing.
Jacquelyn Horne06/14/07
I'm sure children will love this lullaby. Congrats on the win.
Kristen Hester 06/14/07
Wonderful!!!!! A well-deserved win! Congratulations.
Verna Cole Mitchell 06/14/07
Indeed, this is a perfectly beautiful poem. I'm so glad it won! Congratulations!
Janice Fitzpatrick06/14/07
Congrats on winning 1st place!Awesome! What a beautifully written story. I like daddy's explanation and the rhythm of the lines, especially the repeated verses. it has such a lullabye affect to it. YAWN....ok,I'm nodding. This is so good!Janice
Joanne Sher 06/14/07
Oh, Sharlyn, this is absolutely LOVELY! Congrats on your win - it is SO well-deserved!
Marilee Alvey06/14/07
Hey, Sharlyn! Congratulations! First place in Editor's Choice! Your story really topped the chart. You really should go for a book! Fantastic work, friend!
Beth LaBuff 06/14/07
Yay! This was one of my favorites. Congratulations!
Sheri Gordon06/14/07
Congratulations. This is really sweet. A great bedtime story.
Myrna Noyes06/14/07
CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved 1ST PLACE win in Advanced! I loved this piece! :D
Kenn Allan06/14/07
Oh, this is delightful! Certainly a well-deserved win.
Mo 06/14/07
Excellent!
Catrina Bradley 06/14/07
I want a child to read this to!! :) Congrats - this is absolutely delightfully wonderful.
Donna Emery06/15/07
Ah, this is lovely. A well-deserved win. Excellent!
Laury Hubrich 09/19/07
This is REALLY good! It's fun with a message, too.
Laury


   
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