The Official Writing Challenge
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06/10/07
There's a huge moral in your story for modern families. A good story for older 'tweens-the age that starts to be concerned about what others have and what others think.
06/10/07
Very clever use of family names, and the title caught my attention. The word limit might have discouraged a bit of dialogue, but if you ever write an expanded form of this, maybe more dialogue could enhance it?
06/11/07
Love the names of the McGreedy's, fantastic and well written!