The Official Writing Challenge
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06/07/07
I like the idea and the layout. I don't think a publishing company would go with the repeated lines, and they'd probably want more detail about life in China v. the U.S./Australia, but it's still possible with a little more variety in it. I can see missionary societies picking it up.
06/08/07
I love the idea of this, and you did some wonderful contrasts between the two girls. I think this would be extremely effective in your aim!
06/12/07
I think this is GREAT! You gave us pictures. I can see the book as you described it. What a perfect message too. This was very creative. I like it A LOT.