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This would be a great MOPS (Mothers of Preschoolers) devotion. One thing for sure when you look in JESUS' eyes... you see HIS FATHER..... Great job!
05/05/05
A weel thought out and concisely prestented story. One that every parent can identify with. You have a great way of finding just the right ohrase, absolutely love: 'when I have one nerve left and the children are gleefully pouncing on it … I consider Jesus. Well done!
05/05/05
>>but this child – this Holy One – was born to die.<<

Very strong piece... excellent lines (like the one above).
05/06/05
This is certainly a winner in my book. A serious piece written with such humour. It shows the acceptance of things in your life through a gracious God. Thanks for sharing.