The Official Writing Challenge
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I can hear children giggling about this one--lots of information and a wonderful message tucked into the story.
I love the story...captures the imagination, should hold their interest.

I wonder if "bats sleep all day" might create some fear in a young one. I'm a grand-pa and it took me by surprize...good writing...dave
06/10/07
I can imagine this with lots of bright illustrations. I loved it.
06/11/07
Love the way you embrace the imagination! Great writing!