The Official Writing Challenge
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Date
06/11/07
You were able to write a lot of dialog between the boy and the "secret".

I'm afraid your title may turn some people off. In some areas of the world a "dirty secret" has an immoral connotation and I know that's not what your story was about.

Your message at the end is good and I like the phrase you used, "sick heart" and the remedy for a sick heart. Keep writing.