The Official Writing Challenge
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06/10/07
A good story with a good moral! Young children have many fears about new experiences and could understand and appreciate this story and the characters.
06/11/07
I love the ending--it's just what a little kid would say. Great story for little ones, and would make a very nice mommy-read-to-me book.
Very nicely written and realistic. This would make a wonderful sunday school lesson.I can see it in print with illustrations.Lord bless your writing.Keep up the good work.Janice
06/11/07
YES, illustrate and publish me, written all over this fantastic story!
06/11/07
Very nice!
This is so sweet! It reminds me to remind my son that Jesus is with him when he is afraid.
06/12/07
Cute and sweet. I think you captured the emotions of both kids wonderfully, and the message is great.
I liked how you showed in your story that grown-ups have fears, too. That's a good thing for children to see. Your characters were all realistic.
I like Aunt Becky! Wise woman.
06/15/07
Sheri, I liked this story, and I could well imagine reading it to a group of children. You captured the essense of a young child well. Blessings, Cheri