The Official Writing Challenge
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A good story with a good moral! Young children have many fears about new experiences and could understand and appreciate this story and the characters.
I love the ending--it's just what a little kid would say. Great story for little ones, and would make a very nice mommy-read-to-me book.
Very nicely written and realistic. This would make a wonderful sunday school lesson.I can see it in print with illustrations.Lord bless your writing.Keep up the good work.Janice
YES, illustrate and publish me, written all over this fantastic story!
Very nice!
This is so sweet! It reminds me to remind my son that Jesus is with him when he is afraid.
Cute and sweet. I think you captured the emotions of both kids wonderfully, and the message is great.
I liked how you showed in your story that grown-ups have fears, too. That's a good thing for children to see. Your characters were all realistic.
I like Aunt Becky! Wise woman.
Sheri, I liked this story, and I could well imagine reading it to a group of children. You captured the essense of a young child well. Blessings, Cheri