The Official Writing Challenge
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I like this treatment of the "Samuel" story. It seems like he might have felt just that way.
06/11/07
A great way to teach children His word! Well written!
06/11/07
This was very good. I thought you captured a lot of Samuel's thinking and Hannah's as well. I like Samuel's analogy of relating the "giving back" to the clay bowl he gave to his Mom. Your flow on the story is good and very smooth. You are a good writer.
06/13/07
Great story--Little Samuel came alive in it and the concept he had to learn was very interesting--about how giving something or someone you love back to God is different from returning a gift to a human giver. A creative, original slant on the Samuel story!

I was also drawn in by the title, as personal names always spark my curiosity. Great job!