The Official Writing Challenge
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06/07/07
Witty and original. A young child might be bothered by the ending, but maybe not. In any case, I loved it and really got a kick out of the dragon's input.
Very creative story, and humorous, too.
This is funny. I like the dialogue but was hoping that George maybe would get hs name changed or vow to not bother the dragon as he promised he would use his middle name or something.Grin. All in all I really like this. Very cute!!!Janice
06/09/07
This was brilliant -- because of the age level this story would be good for, you may be asked to change the ending so kids won't get nightmares, but you could put it 'as is' into a chapter book -- a mother dragon reading to her kids etc. You show real talent here for children's writing.
Children will probably love this. I like a happy ending. But the writing is good, and what do I know?
06/12/07
LOL! This is just too funny. The ending was little, err...I was kinda hoping he'd get away, but it followed suit as you'd been hinting throughout the story. Good job, especially with the ryhme at the end. I think you slipped your message in so neatly, we can't help but have it stuck in our head when we're finished reading. Good job ^_^
06/12/07
Clever! Sometimes children don't mind an unhappy ending, as long as it's not too gory! I think they would like this one. :)
This one is a winner in my book. I loved it.