The Official Writing Challenge
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06/08/07
This needs to be illustrated and published. Great job.
Well-done! What a beautiful fanatasy story.
Little girls, especially would love this. They'd wnat you to read it to them over and over. I loved the ending.
06/08/07
This has that "classic" children's story feel to it! :) It's a very gentle, sweet tale that little children would love! Good job! :)
06/08/07
Absolutely wonderful! I clicked on the story at random but was drawn in right away, and you kept my attention throughout. Well done!
06/10/07
I agree! This needs to be illustrated and published. Wonderful!
06/11/07
Cool!
06/12/07
Very beautiful! Children would love this story!
I expect to this this place tomorrow! This was perfect for children and I love the use of animals and the MC going from one to another for help.