The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked the creepy feel of this piece. It seemed a little hard to follow at times, but overall was well-written. Good job!
Hmmm. This one I will return to read again. I liked the way you set up the analogy, and it could work in many different directions, depending on the state of mind in which you attack this piece. Great syntax also.
Wow! There's alot there, needs to be read several times, perhaps with Cliff's notes? You're an excellent writer....think I know who you are.
You've worked hard to produce a very polished, strong piece of tight, layered writing. Every word counts. Loved the suspence and wonderfully evocative phrases like: 'the aroma of coping on his breath.'
very strong and deep deep deep writing. Excellent!
A little complex at times, but very clever writing.
Bravo! Bravo! Very clever, excellent writing. Your a master story-teller.
Blessings, Lynda