The Official Writing Challenge
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06/07/07
Loved it!!!!!!!!!!! I honestly did not see where you were going with it at first and I was still loving it. Then it got even better. Love and blessings, Teri
Wow. Short story, short lesson, tall meaning. Well done.
06/07/07
Beautiful! Just right for children in Sunday School and Children's church; not too long, simply told, with a powerful message a child can certainly relate to.
06/08/07
Very sweet - I love the way you brought this story to life, and taught a wonderful lesson in the process.
06/10/07
Excellent!
06/11/07
A wonderful teaching tool! Superb message!
An excellent Bible story told just right for children--with a wonderful message they can readily understand.