The Official Writing Challenge
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06/10/07
I love the way you used the seasons! Great story and the message shines through!
06/11/07
This is a cute story. Is it true? My favorite line is, “When I get out of college I’m going to kindergarten!” especially in light of the story. Thanks!
06/12/07
Cute story! Many children would be able to relate to your main character and her desire to go to school like the "big" kids!
This is such a sweet piece. It helps a child understand the importance of learning to obey so that they are given the privilege of special activities. I too love Linda's statement about getting to go to kindergarten after she's out of college. Very enjoyable story.