The Official Writing Challenge
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06/09/07
I grew up in corn country too. I can see everything you describe. What a good illustration of that verse.
06/10/07
Stories are a wonderful teaching tool, and this one works really well!
06/12/07
I like your story very much! The message is clear, but consistently given in a child's voice. Children can relate to poor Margie! (My Dad made me help plant corn, potatoes and beans; the rows seemed ENDLESS!)
06/13/07
A wonderful way to help children understand a troublesome verse. The story works well, and a good lesson is learned. Well done!
08/14/09
Oh, I like this story Helen. A great object lesson...and as your topic indicated...a good lesson for a child.
Lisa