The Official Writing Challenge
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Cute. I can see kids enjoying this.

Awesome! Iloved the format!
I love it!!! :-)
Cute and fun - the descriptions were so vivid. You have your target audience in the bag. Great stuff!
Very good movement here. Children will certainly act their age and imagination and exaggeration go hand in hand. (A couple more creatures I guess. Way to go with this one. Two thumbs up.
What a fun, lively poem with a good lesson, besides. I like the interspersed voice of "Mum".
This is delightful--one of my favorites this week. Both the child and the mommy in me loved it!
This is fun! Great writing!
Delightfully written. I love the ending especially as mum goes announces the task of cleaning up along with,"Guess what I have something for you..." Well done. Janice
I love the structure of the poetry, and the voices of your speakers. This is charming.
Oh, how we Moms have heard all this before! You did a wonderful job of capturing the ways of an imaginative child...and her smart Mommy. Very lovely!
Have to admit, I've used a few of those lines myself in years past. Cute, creative and well done!
So cute and fun. A perfect children's story! I hear "It wasn't me" quite often.
After reading most in advanced and masters, this is still my favorite!
I really can see this as a book for kids! I used to love the rhyming books when I was little; I'm sure many children and adults alike would love this.
Good children's poetry.
Told you so!! I'm so happy you place so high on EC!
Congratulations. This is really fun. (And I'm very glad that's not my house.)
Awww, very cute... makes me think of Robert Munsch books. You need a good illustrator now! :)