The Official Writing Challenge
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05/02/05
Lovely story and beautifully written.
05/02/05
Very nice! I liked it.
05/02/05
I really liked this one. Your dialogue was very believable and you described the house, the attitude and the financial situation of the major character (Celia) without actually coming out and saying she lived in a mansion, she was snooty and she was filthy rich. Great job!
05/02/05
Sorry, You did actually say she lived in a mansion, didn't you? My bad. It still doesn't change my high opinion of your writing.
Loved the contrast you showed. Beautiful ending. Very moving story!
05/03/05
A Mary Poppins entry: Practically perfect in every way! Lol! :-) Very well constructed and polished. Great message. A real contender!
05/04/05
A story well and gently told. The end engaging without being preachy.
05/07/05
I enjoyed this story. Lovely contrast with the maid sharing her happiness and Mrs Worthington all alone and brooding. I like how the maid's gift transformed the mistress in the end.
05/08/05
One word: wonderful! I loved this story, from the title to the ending. Expertly written.
Great job!
Blessings, Lynda