The Official Writing Challenge
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06/07/07
This is very sweet. I love the ending!
06/07/07
Nice story and I liked the way Melody found to overcome the fear factor. A real surprise ending. Good job. Blessings.
This is so prescious! I love it. I like the ending and the and how the little girl overcomes her anxieties with a little help from her baby sister and a quacker.:0) Keep up the great writing,Janice
06/07/07
Wonderful. This needs some colorful illustrations and it would be a great read aloud story.
06/08/07
Sweet and cute - some of the language seemed a bit "old", but that may just be me. I love the ending!
Beautiful. If we could all learn to let our ducky's gobble up our worries :-)
06/10/07
Very cute! Funny last line (but maybe a bit confusing for a sensitive child who loves real butterflies?) Great job!
06/11/07
You drew me right in with, five year old Melody singing like an angel! It kept getting better and better right to the perfect ending!
06/11/07
Great last line!
This is a cute story--might be a good lesson for a child with stage fright.
09/19/07
Very cute story!
Laury