The Official Writing Challenge
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06/09/07
Good ideas and oh so true!
06/10/07
Nuggets of wisdom! Good job!
06/10/07
Nice poem with a great lesson! My favorite part that sums up the whole message is--

"So the trip down this road may not be easy and quick

the thorns and bushes are tall and thick

if you look to your heart for the guiding light

you might just make it down this road over night....

When the wind is restless and the night is long

look to him to keep you strong"

Good job! :)
06/12/07
This is a heart-felt poem that older kids can understand and value!