The Official Writing Challenge
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Ahhh, this was precious. I liked the invitation at the end!
06/08/07
I love that this precious story encourages children to accept Jesus into their heart!
06/11/07
Cute story with the best of messages! My favorite part was after Bo Bear prayed and, "he felt happy that he’d opened the door of his heart to Jesus. And he knew that from that day forward, he would have a friend no matter where he’d be or where he’d go." I loved the little song Mama Bear sang, too! :)
06/12/07
What a wonderful way to introduce the message of salvation to little ones!
06/12/07
Great story for salvation - you wrote this well that a child would be able to understand.