The Official Writing Challenge
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06/07/07
Nice story. I especially enjoyed the descriptive language you used for Tinsel's dance.
06/08/07
Great story. I can see little girls grabbing this off the bookshelf to read.
Little girls will love this! I like the descriptions also.
Good job!
06/08/07
Nice story and a good message!
06/08/07
I agree, little girls would love this story, but this big girl loved it a lot too!
This is a delightful story for how the grass is greener on the other side. It could prompt lots of discussion. The visual imagery adds to the story's enjoyment. I, too, can see little girls loving this.
Definately a charming story for little girls. Well written and I like how the character learns to be satisifed with what she alreday possesses. Great lesson learned. Janice:0)P.S. bravo on s great story.
06/12/07
Oh, this is a sweet story with a good moral. Your main character would be appealing to any little girl!
06/12/07
Well done!! Entertaining and filled with wonderful details with a terrific ending:)
This was delightful, funny and full of colorful description. Any child would love hearing this read to them. Kudos to you!