The Official Writing Challenge
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06/02/07
Oooooo...the kind of adventure I NEVER want to know! Chilling descriptions; I wanted to stop reading, but I couldn't!
06/04/07
Wow! What an adventure. This was haunting and chilling but well written. My only suggestion would be in the beginning part to give a little spacing for an easier read, but still, WOW! Great job.